Monday, September 27, 2010

Story

The Story

Derek Clayton


One day I was standing alone way ahead of my tribe looking over a hill at the water. I saw this little boat that had a man standing on the end of the point on his ship. He looked like a rich man and he looked like he was coming to look for something. Me and my tribe started to walk down the hill to keep on your hunting adventure. We had along walk but we ended up at the waters edge. The boat that I saw was on the shore and the sound of men were making my tribe scared because they thought they were giants. A man came down he looked like a white gangster boy came jumping down and put a pole in the ground. He said he claimed this land by right of discovery.

I walked up to him and said this is my land I discovered it back off man. Then this white gangsta man pulled out a paper and yelled! Give me gold and find it now! He made my people wear these things on there necks and when they brought back enough gold for the gangsta dude he would put a hole on the necklace so my people didn’t get killed. Some of my people got tired and tried to run away but the guy sent dogs after my people and killed them. Some of my people could not get the right amount of gold and there hands would get chopped off. It was worst for me I had to bring back double the load then my other tribe members.

He left for awhile and he brought back more people. They seemed like creeps they were touching my people and shooting them. I was freaking out and I told my tribe we were not going to take it anymore we decided to fight back and take this white boy gangster down and kill him. We gathered our Spears and all of the available rocks and boulders. We all assembled in a line and charged. Gun shots went flying by ours heads and makes a splat and one of the my tribe members dropped dead. We started throwing our Spears and rocks taking out some people but they over powered us with all there military power and guns. We retreated back to the gold fields.

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